Not sure why you have embedded each slide separately - Use Slideshare. You are supposed to be showing how you have developed yet you spend most of the time pointing out the errors that still exist in the final film... You spend a lot of time talking about (and showing) editing but then just skip over things like camera work, planning and sound. Talk about these more at give specific examples. Don't forget about research, scripting etc. You are still not being that great with technology - too much writing on some slide and no visual. Not sure that PPT was the best choice for this. Some thing like a video podcast or edited piece to camera would have worked better....
Not sure why you have embedded each slide separately - Use Slideshare. You are supposed to be showing how you have developed yet you spend most of the time pointing out the errors that still exist in the final film... You spend a lot of time talking about (and showing) editing but then just skip over things like camera work, planning and sound. Talk about these more at give specific examples. Don't forget about research, scripting etc. You are still not being that great with technology - too much writing on some slide and no visual. Not sure that PPT was the best choice for this. Some thing like a video podcast or edited piece to camera would have worked better....
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